this is quite a drawing! i can just imagine the words coming out of heidrich's mouth, you've represented him as a character so well (pinky out!)! the expression is very good, as well as the lineart. The lable on the wine bottle doesn't seem to fit in with the way the bottle is drawn, maybe if you flipped it over vertically(?) it could look better. the shading and anatomy is very good, except that heidrich, being a silken windhound, has much much longer hair on the neck and chest, as well as him having a sort of collie/roman nosed muzzle. the gradient shading looks awesome! the sort of scribble lines do kind of kill it for me, as they don't really look like they belong in he whole picture. one last thing, under the table cloth, there's a show of the sky every now and then. i don't know if its purposeful or anything, but i personally feel it can be fixed.
overall, this is a very nice piece of artwork showing the class and elegance this character has, even when getting drunk! hope this critique was helpful
YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUU SOUJA BOY UP IN skjfhskdjfhkdsjfjsdfdjk WHY ME CRANK IT WHY ME fkdsjkfhlksdjfh I fail at lyrics ok idfk them. I'm not nice or perfect but thanks.
The lable on the wine bottle doesn't seem to fit in with the way the bottle is drawn, maybe if you flipped it over vertically(?) it could look better.
the shading and anatomy is very good, except that heidrich, being a silken windhound, has much much longer hair on the neck and chest, as well as him having a sort of collie/roman nosed muzzle.
the gradient shading looks awesome! the sort of scribble lines do kind of kill it for me, as they don't really look like they belong in he whole picture.
one last thing, under the table cloth, there's a show of the sky every now and then. i don't know if its purposeful or anything, but i personally feel it can be fixed.
overall, this is a very nice piece of artwork showing the class and elegance this character has, even when getting drunk! hope this critique was helpful
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